No offense, but this isn't a very compelling story. It begins sad, and ends sad. So there's no major turning point, change in emotions. If you know how these stories go, you know everything that's gonna happen from first couple sentences.
I will praise one moment - it's kind of cool when in school, you are taught that Lucille won't say the dialog options out loud, which is then subverted when talking to the two girls discussing sex.
I can't criticize it because I don't know creator's life - I mean, this game could be something close to a therapeutic journal. In that case that's obviously something that matters. But I can't know that, and as a story in isolation it feels like it tries to be shocking, but with not enough substance.
Hi! We at Neophyte have played the game, and we believe you might need to tweak your content warning to be a little bit more clear. The text is, at times, extremely graphic. We worry that, those sensitive to this material, aren't quite equipped to make a decision as to whether the game will trouble them.
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No offense, but this isn't a very compelling story. It begins sad, and ends sad. So there's no major turning point, change in emotions. If you know how these stories go, you know everything that's gonna happen from first couple sentences.
I will praise one moment - it's kind of cool when in school, you are taught that Lucille won't say the dialog options out loud, which is then subverted when talking to the two girls discussing sex.
I can't criticize it because I don't know creator's life - I mean, this game could be something close to a therapeutic journal. In that case that's obviously something that matters. But I can't know that, and as a story in isolation it feels like it tries to be shocking, but with not enough substance.
Very dark.
Hi! We at Neophyte have played the game, and we believe you might need to tweak your content warning to be a little bit more clear. The text is, at times, extremely graphic. We worry that, those sensitive to this material, aren't quite equipped to make a decision as to whether the game will trouble them.